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Planetry Murder (Rated R)
07-17-2010, 01:05 AM
Post: #11
RE: Planetry Murder (Rated R)
She walked over defensively. She takes their guns.
"Get on the ground now and put your hands behind your back," she said violently.
She hand cuffs them.
"Hang on Aleron I have your back, don't move ok," she said moving his hair out of his face.
She smiled down at him sadly. The ambulance is heard in the distance.
"They are almost here," she said gently.
Her hair had fallen around her face. The ambulance arrives and begins to assist.

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07-17-2010, 04:39 AM
Post: #12
RE: Planetry Murder (Rated R)
Aleron sat back down and goes, "okay." The EMTs began to see that the bullet went clean through and they bandaged it up and put a sling on his arm. The driver goes, "you need to go to the hospital to make sure there is no series damage to your shoulder. Will you come with us or can you get someone else to take you?" Aleron looked to them and goes, "I will go with you." The men lay there with their hands cuffed behind their back waiting to be led to the police car. The ambulance then pulled out a stretcher and goes, "here let us help you." They help him in to the stretcher and he calls his Uncle's cell phone he figured that his uncle was about done with the house for his sister but he hoped that he picked up his cell phone.

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07-17-2010, 11:37 AM
Post: #13
RE: Planetry Murder (Rated R)
Keravive walked toward her prisoners. She picks them up on to their feet and puts them in the car.
"Stay there and don't move I have authority to use deadly force," she said.
The guys gulp and stay still. Soon she is in her vehicle and its off to the jail house. She gets there and books them. After that she is off to the hospital.
Meanwhile at the house Thomas answers his phone.
"Thomas... yeah.... WHAT I'M ON MY WAY!" He said.
Meanwhile at the hospital. She finally finds Aleron's room.
"Hey," she said walking in.

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07-17-2010, 01:01 PM
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RE: Planetry Murder (Rated R)
Aleron hangs up his phone and the doctors do a MRI and see that the bullet broke two bones in his shoulder but will heal if he keeps it in the sling and that he has a very mild concussion from hitting the wall as hard as he did. Aleron was left to rest in the hospital room until his Uncle got there. Aleron woke up and said, "hey Keravive, I am going to be fine just have two broken bones in my shoulder from where the bullet went through but they say it will heal in the sling. Going to be hard to cook for a while. I also have a very mild concussion. But going to be okay. Did you get them booked?" he asked curiously.

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07-17-2010, 01:10 PM
Post: #15
RE: Planetry Murder (Rated R)
"Hell yeah they were booked," she said upset.
She looked at him her brows furled.
"Ok but that still sounds bad," she said.
Thomas come into the room.
"How are you feeling son?" He asked.
He paid attention to how close Keravive was to Aleron.

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07-17-2010, 01:21 PM
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RE: Planetry Murder (Rated R)
Korbin and Annalise, known as K and Twitch, rolled up in a pair of loaned cars the government were loaning to them. It was a pink Honda S2000, and a Silver Nissan Skyline. "Hey, what's the buy-in for tonight?" He asked a couple of black guys at the entrance to a street lined with cars.

"$5,000." a fat dude replied.

"Ok, paying for me and my little sister." Korbin said, handing the guy $10,000.

"Ok. They're waiting for you." The other black dude said, As the pair rolled through the crowd.

"alright, K and Twitch are here!! Don't get them together.They will stomp you all!" A mexican dude said from the hood of his car.

"Ok, K, you in the first heat. Twitch, you in the second. Radarman, what's the sitch?

"We have cops, but they are taking care of an accident 20 blocks away." Radarman, who appeard to be about 16, said from behind the glow of his computer.

"OK. Let's do this. The pot is at $50,000. It goes to the winners of the 2 heats, most likely K and Twitch." The Mexican continued, as he brought the first group forward. He then said, " Dockside, back of. there is a black car with green neons there. Winner of the heat stays behind, the rest, go home!"

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07-17-2010, 01:26 PM
Post: #17
RE: Planetry Murder (Rated R)
Aleron then goes, "I am okay I guess. Two broken bones in my shoulder from the bullet and a mild concussion." Aleron smiled at her and goes, "yeah I know it does. But I promise you I will be okay. Hey maybe they will give me a black sling so when I wear my black pants and blank tank top shirt you wear, it will match it, on our date tomorrow?" he said trying to ease he mind. He then goes, "Uncle this is my girlfriend. We been together for two months now. I am a little tired and ready to go home for a bit." He said about to go to sleep as he talked from the medicine they gave him. He then said, "heard anything from Cecilia?"

Cecilia was informed they would be getting to the planet sooner then thought and they would be there by tomorrow and she goes, "wow" she then sent a text message to her uncle and goes, "Uncle Thomas, just got informed by the pilot that we will be there tomorrow. Can you or someone there pick us up? How is Aleron and you doing?" she asked not knowing what is going on since she is on the airplane.

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07-17-2010, 01:52 PM
Post: #18
RE: Planetry Murder (Rated R)
"Yeah that would be cool," she said sweetly.
Right then she showed a side that one ever got to see: sweet and cute. She bent down to kiss him gently.
"I'll try to see if they'll let you come home with me so you can have some one to take care of you since I have tomorrow off," she said lightly.
Thomas looks at them and shakes his head.
"Ok you two save it for later and you miss work to hard so its vacation time for you," Thomas said.
Keravive smiled and brightened really quickly.
"Well I'll be back in a bit I'm gunna go talk to the doctor," she said disappearing.

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07-17-2010, 02:06 PM
Post: #19
RE: Planetry Murder (Rated R)
ooc: um you forgot to post to Cecilia texting Thomas?

ic: Aleron then goes, "okay hunny." He looked to his uncle hearing his uncle's phone go off and goes, "Uncle I think you got a text on your phone. It might be Cecilia." He then fell asleep in the bed the medicine really wore him out. The doctor saw Keravive coming their way and goes, "may help you? is something wrong Aleron?" he asked making sure it was nothing serious the doctor really cared about all his patients. Aleron was sleeping as he waited for Keravive to talk to the doctor. He hoped Cecilia and her kids were okay.

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07-18-2010, 12:51 AM
Post: #20
RE: Planetry Murder (Rated R)
Thomas takes out his cell phone and looks at the text. Dearest Ceci he wrote I'll personally pick you up tomorrow. Aleron is going to be fine his shop was almost robbed. Thanks to one of my best detectives he is going to be fine. Thank you for let me know. He puts his cellphone back into his pocket.
"That was Cecilia she'll be here tomorrow," he said.
Meanwhile Keravive was speaking with the doctor.
"Would it possible for him to come home today?" she asked.
"Well if he shows stability then yes but we have to finish patching him up all I need is a black arm sling and he can go home," the doctor said.

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