Rasen's Poems

[Rasen-Shuriken]

Sun Setting in the Water

The sun is sitting on the water shining its light before
setting in to the deep cold sea, before the sun sets
i feel love and warm to see such a beautful sight
it makes anyone feel happy to sit and gaze across the horizon
and the red sun, the sky is filled with the colours
red,purple,orange and blue, the colours of the sky
makes me feel happy and i feel i have found love in
my life, i wish i could stare at the sunset forever
knowing it will never set and i can just be happy gazing at its beauty
but soon the sun sets all is dark and i feel cold but i still
feel happy that i get to see such things in the evenings
i only wish i could see it more in my life.

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Sakura Tree

you are beautiful as the winds blow your petals fill arround me with your scent as you are pure from a tree, the sakura tree is the most beautful tree in the world filled with happyness and fantasy you are exactly like it, loving pure bliss who ever will stand with you will know true heaven you are the protector and the lover you gaurd me with your wamrth and kindness your colour is bright pink and yet you are everywhere, i could keep you, i would be happy for the rest of my life.

[Cecilia Rose Demonic Princess]

very nice work so far. the second one sounds like it could easily be turned into a story

[Rasen-Shuriken]

The Day You Said You Loved Me

The day you said you loved me
Was the day i died and went to
Heaven, my mind went blank my
Heart felt at ease, my eyes were
Teary my face felt light, the happyness
Filled my heart as i loved you more
Than you could ever love me
The day you said you loved me
Was the day i died in your arms
Happily feeling your warmth.
As i kissed your soft lips gently
I realised i was more inlove with
You by every passing second of
My life.

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thanks ceecee <3

[Cecilia Rose Demonic Princess]

you welcome.

[Rasen-Shuriken]

Mini poems


The Word is full of love and
hate my life is filledwith both things
in one place hate rules and im almost
tormented by it, Love im always after for
im always blessed in it

You are never here your always away from me
for i end up missing you too much i wonder
where you are but the darkness arround me
block out the light and deep within i have lost you


The times i love you are the times you push me away
I feel though you dont want me anymore and ceased all
contact with me....

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My heart aches for your love but you never give
My heart yearns for you but your never here
My heart wants to be filled with love and happyness
But again you never satsify or even try
the loneyness i feel is a pure dark hole leading nowhere
the bottom of my heart can never get enough love for its
what i live and feed upon to keep me alive, deny me love
you deny me a right to live, i can not force love it has to
come with in my heart will always find a space to love another
there is always space in my heart for i will love everyone
and everything, my love for you is unlimited i will give as much
of my heart as you want for i will never run out of a piece of my
own heart.

[Cecilia Rose Demonic Princess]

very good and very cool

[Rasen-Shuriken]

thank you hehe

[Cecilia Rose Demonic Princess]

got any more you want to put up?